People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion.

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Environment
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issue is one of the biggest
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among parent and many older people
in
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nowadays, many
believes
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that
by
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increasing the fuel price can save the
environment
from destruction. Well, from my point of view
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the ideas, by invest some attention to build more public transportation and make the tough rule or fine can helps for
environment
issue. Not everyone
voluntarly
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voluntarily
picking own transport as
first
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thing, due to not
flexiblity
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flexibility
using public transport is the reason why people considering
have
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a car is a must for every individual after
certain
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age. When the governments fail to build easier transportation for
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daily usage.The
intension
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intention
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to help the
environment
and to stop the over vehicle population will never happen.
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more door to door buses or nearby train
station
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like in urban will be
a the
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first
considerable options for the public to choose
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leave
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the home.
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, every country organiser should
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some strict rules and fines for the human bad behaviours
especially
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in
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the roads. In
this
busy scheduled life, everyone will be rushed
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from one place to another place by not following the rules, and end up with more traffic or
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even a major
accidents
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can cost the heavy traffic or even a life. To avoid
this
,
government
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the government
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can have more road cameras or more police
force
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in
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main roads to capture the vehicle’s number and to take
a
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serious action on the particular person. In conclusion, The government should take efforts to
educated
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the public but not to make the
petrols
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petrol
price high which will not
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to change anything
to
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the public or
an
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environment
but it will
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effect
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the average income families for the daily survival.
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