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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to the advanced technology which can prevent and solve crime.Do you agree or disagree?

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crime
rate
 is the biggest concern all over the world , but ,
fortunately
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 nowadays , it is going down compared to the past and I think there are multiple components playing role in
this
 development ,including advanced technology which can prevent and solve the
crime
. I agree
this
 is a positive development for civilisation. Downgrade trend in
crime
rate
 much or less,
firstly
 due to widespread use of surveillance system and close-circuit cameras which ,help monitor shopping mall ,high traffic institutions and places where there was high
crime
rate
 before ,so it reduces the entry of criminals as they already know that they are under watch and any
crime
 they commit will be under-recording,
therefore
 there will be no escape ,
additionally
 recent pandemic of covid-19
also
 had restricted movements of people across public areas and everywhere screeners are present for counting numbers of visitors to comply with government regulations and these had added in lowering in
crime
rate
.
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 in one tertiary level hospital after the covid-19 pandemic and introduction of strict visitors policy incidents of theft and vandalism almost become zero in the
last
 one and half years. Another contributor may be in some countries is the legalisation of cannabis and raising the limit of some illicit drugs which has contributed to a low
crime
rate
 .During the
pandemic
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 people are staying home so less traffic and commute overall and better to monitor when fewer civilians are on screen.CCTV footage and surveillance records make
the
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life for law patrollers easy as by,reviewing those records they can easily identify the criminals and the court can punish them
accordingly
. In,conclusion advancements in technologies had helped with tightening security and resolving
crime
, which is a positive development in my opinion.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • surveillance systems
  • CCTV cameras
  • forensic technology
  • crime scene analysis
  • conviction rates
  • data analytics
  • predictive policing
  • high-risk areas
  • cybersecurity measures
  • cybercrime
  • sensitive information
  • social media
  • online platforms
  • emergencies
  • law enforcement response
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