You have bought electronic equipment and within two days it started to go wrong. write a letter to shopkeeper about your dissatisfaction with the product and services. Ask him to find proper solution for the problem.

Dear Mr Dav. My name is Jay, and I have been enjoying the service of your

store

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for five years. Today,

however

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, I am writing to complain about the smartwatch that I bought from your

store

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two days ago.

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, I want to address the poor performance of the

store

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's client service. Let me describe what went wrong with my smartwatch. In the beginning, everything worked fine without any noticeable issue, but after 48 hours I noticed a problem with the battery.

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the vendor's manual mentioned that the battery should

last

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for 16 hours at least, mine lasts for only two hours. I have been calling the customer service at your

store

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to help me out, but they never called me back. I would kindly ask you to fully refund me. I hope you will consider my situation favourably. Should you require any more information please do not hesitate to ask. Waiting for your reply. Best regards, Jay Smith

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

160 words

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