Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production can preservation outweigh the advantages?

In today's era of hurry and ,bustle no
one
has time to cook
food
and either they depend on ready-made
food
from restaurants or on pre-cooked
food
from large scale
food
manufacturers and
this
food
manufactured had
then
stored and transported to sellers ,so there is a large gap between production and consumption of
food
and to keep
food
in good shape and taste in process of manufacturing number of additive added as preservatives.Now the question arises,Is these preservatives are safe! I am not a hundred per cent sure about the safety of those ingredients but going to discuss them in the essay. From reading labels of some packaged foods , I found
one
substance named Sodium citrate as a preservative widely used and the majority of consumers take it as inert as claimed by the
food
industry and the producers got permission from the
food
and drugs department as a safe ingredient but actual long term effects on a wide range of diverse population and particularly on young and developing brains no
one
knows,so how much safe is questionable. Another example can be Vinegar(Acetic Acid) which is
also
consumed in the pickle industry, as a preservative and has no safety profile known so far. But for
food
,industries these substances are life-saving boons which earns them lots of revenue as with the aid of these substances they can run their production smoothly and conveniently and make packaged
food
look safer and fresher. In , a conclusion I would like to say if we can avoid and find time to prepare fresh
food
for ourselves and for our family that will be the best choice as preservatives are for me something we should avoid as much as we can because hundred per cent guarantee of safety no
one
can provide, so for me benefits of preservation does not outweigh the disadvantage.
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