Most of the world’s poor live in countries where tourism is a growth industry. The issue is that tourism does not benefit the poor. How can the income generated by tourism benefit the poor? And how can we ensure that tourism does not destroy traditional culture and ways of life?

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Many economic experts assert that
tourism
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does not benefit the poor even though most of the
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poor live in countries where
tourism
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is a growth industry. I would like to explain why
tourism
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does not benefit the poor, how income that can benefit the poor can be generated, and how to prevent
tourism
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from destroying traditional
culture
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and ways of life.
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of all, many experts say that the reason why
tourism
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does not help the poor is that most of the
money
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which comes from
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goes to the rich. People who have sufficient
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can develop attractions that are worth going to like a botanical garden, a zoo, and so on.
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, poor people are just staff who work there, receiving low wages.
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, the poor cannot make much
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from
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.
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,
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that benefits the poor should be in some places like a
market
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.
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, tourists buy products like handicrafts, souvenirs, or traditional goods in a store in the
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that
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will go directly to the store owner. It can directly help them.
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promoting some sites which are relevant places to the poor like a
market
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and making tourists spend
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there may help directly.
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, it is
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important to prevent
tourism
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from destroying traditional
culture
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.
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to promoting
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market
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, they can
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promote experiencing their lifestyle and traditional
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through tours,
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as trying on their traditional clothes or sleeping in their traditional house.
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kind of
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can help them to make
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without destroying their own cultures. To sum up,
tourism
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does not help the poor because most of the
money
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made from
tourism
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goes to the rich. Promoting some sites like a
market
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that is
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relevant to the poor directly and allowing them to make
money
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can be a solution.
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,
tourism
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can include experiencing their traditional
culture
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and lifestyle not to destroy their own cultures.
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