Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government , while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is universally acknowledged that the major part of

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supporting the youth is not acceptable for necessary

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in the authority while other ones suggest that taking on the

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young

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is an excellent idea. İ

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the

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that Young

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are clearly acceptable for essential

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positions

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simply because the Youth is the origin of new ideas and innovations. On the one hand,

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think that young

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are not advisable for a vital

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in

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. One of the reasons for

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idea is the lack of

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experience

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and professional skills for these

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positions

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, some

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of

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require huge

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in

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policy, economy, security etc. and without relevant

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in

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it is clearly difficult to take these points.

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,

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support

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that young

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people

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should be taken on the essential

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position

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and I absolutely agree with

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point of

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. Owing to innovative and modern ideas young well-educated

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can cope with the hardest to comprehend

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on the

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. These ideas can be engines for developing different fields

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as economy, cultural and social life, healthcare etc. In spite of old statemen with rich

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, who, obviously,

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the traditional conservative points of

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on various fields of society. To exemplify, a person, who graduated from the best university with a modern educating system, which uses high emerging technologies, might collaborate

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experience

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in the education sphere of society. İn conclusion, the majority of

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suggest that young

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are not acceptable for necessary

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in the

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, while others

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that it is an excellent conception for young

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to hold these posts. I absolutely agree with the

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point of

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. I think the governments should take the young

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on an important

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and create the conditions for sharing the

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with young

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by old

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workers.