unemployment is one of the biggest problem of contempory society. What do you think are the main cause of unemployment.what Solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays in modern societies lack of Job has become a major problem.
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essay will articulate some causes of
this
problem as new technology inventions and growing
population
and purpose some possible solutions to alleviate them. To commence with, one of the main
cause
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of unemployment is technology. To explain it, many companies prefer to use
machines
instead
of
human
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humans
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because they think that
machineries
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machinery
types of machinery
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work without any mistake.
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, a survey was conducted by
‘worker
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the ‘worker
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union’ in 2016, found that most of the people are jobless because most of the factories are using
machines
instead
of
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a human
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human
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humans
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. As a Solution,
government
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the government
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should start new projects in which there is less use of
machines
so that individuals get
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the opportunity
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opportunity
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opportunities
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of
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job
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jobs
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.
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Further more
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, another cause of unemployment is
growing
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the growing
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population
of the world.
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, due to
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the rise
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in
population
, employment is decreasing day by day because there
are
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more
number of
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people as
compare
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to
number
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a number
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of jobs.
For Instance
, the article was published in ‘The New York Times’ revealed that there
are
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less
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fewer
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number
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fewer
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of jobs as
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to
population
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the population
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in the world. To solve
this
problem,
government
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the government
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should make strict laws against
growing
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the growing
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population
to provide jobs to individuals. In conclusion,
tere
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there
are various causes of unemployment in
contempory
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contemporary
society like technology and
population
. So,
government
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the government
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should make laws to control
population
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the population
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and start new projects in which
uses
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the uses
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of
machines
are less
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