Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it

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Dear Mr John, I am Anna John,writing

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letter to inform you regarding a mobile phone that I have purchased from your shop

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Friday.My order number is 20041582 and I would like to raise a complaint against the item purchased . It is a Samsung Galaxy phone with model number M51 and the specified feature is that it has a fast-charging feature .When I checked it at the shop everything was working fine and the salesman asked me to keep the mobile in charging position for 8 hrs before the initial use .

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,the phone was not charged,even if it plugged in for more than the specified time. from my initial ,investigation it seems like there is an issue with the charging portal. So I would like to request you to replace the item worth 16000 rupees and since I have not used it yet. I am attaching a copy of my bill details along with

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letter and you can check for

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details.Expecting a swift and positive reply. Yours sincerely, Anna

amitha13489Sat Jan 22 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

173 words

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Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it

You have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around your city Write a letter of application to the tourism office In the letter give your reasons for wanting the job explain why

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or a shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

The gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider; the rich are becoming richer, and the poor are getting even poorer. What problems can the situation cause? What can be done to reduce this gap?

Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many adults are returning to school to learn new skills for career change. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.