In many countries it is common for families to own and run their business. Some people think it is the best way to run a business while other consider this a potential source of problems. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Most of the countries
people
have some fascination to do their own family
business
through there have
also
some problems create.I partially agree with
this
statement.I think it is a matter of own that has some pros and cons
also
. Looking
first
at the one, some countries are more prefer doing
business
instead
of a
job
. Even the
business
always be their family
business
.
Firstly
we can talk about the family
business
which is related to
people
's blood. For that
business
people
couldn't go any other country.
For instance
, The time's survey reported that in some country as Bangladesh Khulna district 80% public is always related to their family
business
and it helps them to progress quickly. Though businesses have some risks that the community can adjust from childhood. So it's not a big deal for those
people
. That's why these
people
did not want to go another place. Moving on the
next
, doing
business
is always better than a
job
. Though jobs earning way is limited but it has future community thinks it. Some are addicted to the family that's why a
job
is not suitable
Change preposition
for these
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these
Correct determiner usage
this
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community
Fix the agreement mistake
communities
show examples
.
Also
some drawbacks in
business
such
as - The government survey report that the
business
raises financial way of
this
country and
also
sometimes down the financial development for the
business
. Running the families
business
is always a wise decision. Some oppose always stay in every topic. But there have more pros than cons I think. Because for doing
business
public not necessary to be well educated. Every person can do their family
job
whether for doing the
job
people
needs to be more skilled and educated. To conclude, It is a personal matter to do a
job
or
business
. If they get good source
people
should do
business
to stay with
this
family and protect the family
business
.
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