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Some people think that young children need to attend nursery before primary school. While others believe young children can spend all day at home. Duscuss both views and give your opinion.

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People are divided into two parts for ,how young
children
 should start their educational carrier, via
nursery
 or direct primary
school
 admission ,opponents and supporters of the view ,have a firm belief for their own ideas. In the essay ,I will elaborate on both options in detail, but in the end ,I think attending a
nursery
 should be more fruitful. Attending
nursery
 prior to going in primary
school
 give
children
 exposure to the same age and minded young candidates with whom they can play ,sing rhymes and do fun activities ,
furthermore
 develop friendship and interaction without any restriction ,so allowing their natural way of development with giving early exposure of peer relations,
additionally
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 these
children
 will work according to their age-related brain and skills but will get chances of practice before the actual
school
 ,
therefore
 the skills will be well adopted and well practised ,
therefore
 they actually enter the
school
 with confidence,
moreover
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this
 attendance is not compulsory so they can skip whenever they are not comfortable, so freedom of attendance. If they directly go to primary
school
 they will go from parents training and care to primary teachers
where
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, they need to face new
children
 ,teachers and environment out of sudden ,that may be shocking for some
children
,can give more or less anxiety for
school
 and maybe negative attitude for attending
school
,which may affect their
school
 performance. In ,
the
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conclusion I think nothing wrong with sending
children
 to
nursery
 before primary
school
, rather than staying home all the time ,following parenteral care and jumping directly into primary
school
 without any training from non-parent professionals.
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