You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house.

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Dear Roger, Hello! Hope you're in pink health. I'm writing

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letter to share the good news about my new house in which I have moved recently. The house is quite spacious in which I have moved it contains four bedrooms, one living room, and a modular kitchen. It is a flat which is in the high rise building including electronic equipment

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as a chimney, washing machine, and so on. In fact,describing the neighbourhood, it is so appealing as there is greenery everywhere, and society severes free gym facilities for the all the people living around.

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, the people near to me are sophisticated and really helpful. It would be great if you would visit someday at my place, we will have dinner together and along with ,that I will show all the things about the house including decoration which I did according to my taste. I hope you will soon plan to visit my place. Warm Wishes, Swati

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house.

some students decide to take a gap year, what is your opinion?

Ordinary people try to copy famous personalities by seeing them on TV or reading about them in the newspapers. What is the reason for this? Is it a good idea to copy famous personalities?

Some colleges encourage students to create businesses while they are still in school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people believe that the increasing use of the computers and the mobile phones has a negative effect on young people's reading and writing skills, TO what extent do you agree or disagree?

The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks now.