You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house.

Dear Roger, Hello! Hope you're in pink health. I'm writing

this

letter to share the good news about my new house in which I have moved recently. The house is quite spacious in which I have moved it contains four bedrooms, one living room, and a modular kitchen. It is a flat which is in the high rise building including electronic equipment

such

as a chimney, washing machine, and so on. In fact,describing the neighbourhood, it is so appealing as there is greenery everywhere, and society severes free gym facilities for the all the people living around.

Also

, the people near to me are sophisticated and really helpful. It would be great if you would visit someday at my place, we will have dinner together and along with ,that I will show all the things about the house including decoration which I did according to my taste. I hope you will soon plan to visit my place. Warm Wishes, Swati

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