The graphs shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London

The graphs shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London
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The line graph provides information on the changing the number of people at London underground terminals over 16 hours.
According to
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the data, the amount of people at stations fluctuates significantly during the entire day between 6 am and 10
pm
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. The number of people at stations increases sharply from 6 am to 8 am and it reaches a peak of 400 at 8 o’clock. After two hours, it falls dramatically by over 200 passengers. Afterwards, it goes up gradually again until 2 o’clock.
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, the amount of passengers by terminals falls once more and hits a bottom of just under 100 at 4:00
pm
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.
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, it has gone up considerably anew reaching the
second
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-highest value at 6
pm
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. And between 8
pm
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and 10 ,
pm
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it is a final sharp fall.
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, from 8
pm
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to10 ,
pm
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the amount of users of the terminals rapidly changes.
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, it can be seen as the most crowded morning and evening time because of the highest number of passengers recorded at the underground station and least crowded at 4:00
pm
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words pm with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "falls" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "goes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "goes" was used 2 times.
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