As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
One of the biggest technological innovations is of course
computers
, and they are being prominently used in teaching and placing teachers in the
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place. This
shift from humans to machines is a good sign, but replacing cannot be viewed positively. This
essay will throw light on benefits
as well as drawbacks.
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the benefits
Firstly
, no doubt computers
are becoming an integral part of education
system. One of the main Add an article
the education
advantage
is it promotes independent learning and study, Change to a plural noun
advantages
thus
demoting the concept of rote learning and cramming into the topics. Another benefit is that desktops are becoming part and parcel of distance learning. To say that pupil
can achieve knowledge any time and anywhere according to their convenience. Fix the agreement mistake
pupils
For instance
, by traveling
or even by sitting at home.
Despite the merits, there are some demerits to Change the spelling
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this
. Firstly
, without the help of a teacher
it would be hard for the students to decide which way or where Add a comma
,teacher
do
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of
the contents. To elaborate Change preposition
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this
, if there will be no one to guide then
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of getting deviated to the unauthorized websites leading to Correct article usage
the chances
collection
of wrong data will be more. Another possible drawback is that there is a need Add an article
a collection
the collection
of
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internet
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the internet
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For example
, in many remote areas
there is no availability of internet, which in turn would necessitate the need for teachers in those places.
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also
need humans to operate on. Though computers
can be beneficial in terms of adapting to new learning and informative ways of learning,
but can be proved unbeneficial when it comes to proper guidance and supervision, which can be provided by teachers only.Remove the comma
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