Some suggest that young people should take a job for a few years between school and university. Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this. I

Luxurious life is not for everyone perhaps even High-quality education I must say.

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young fellows venture

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kinds of job opportunities in order to support their expenses. Does going overboard in engaging

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work after school worth the risk? Throwing oneself into college carries

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kinds of experience and emotions.

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with, some might think

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that having

a job for a couple of years before entering college is a disadvantage. For they think that

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is being wasted.

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, since everyone is not

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privileged

enough to continue education without experiencing hurdles. So those hapless individuals

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to strive more than the others. Come to think of it, these young people

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to work their ass off in order to provide for themselves. Everyone will be ahead

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steps or a lot of steps than them. They might be

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and mentally drained due to the hardships, for what? Just to enter their dream university like the other guys. No

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when spent with the right

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intention

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, I think there are still advantages with the topic mentioned above. There is always a result in every effort an individual makes.

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, working before entering college is a waste of

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for others but enough

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to fully discover your passion.

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, you can buy the things you need for school. And

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, after you graduate you are

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and mold by the experiences that others do not have. In Conclusion, there will always be

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negative and positive

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for every situation in life. Perspective is one of the

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to overcoming trials in life.