Some suggest that young people should take a job for a few years between school and university. Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this. I

Luxurious life is not for everyone perhaps even High-quality education I must say.
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young fellows venture
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kinds of job opportunities in order to support their expenses. Does going overboard in engaging
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time
work after school worth the risk? Throwing oneself into college carries
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similar
kinds of experience and emotions.
To begin
with, some might think
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that having
a job for a couple of years before entering college is a disadvantage. For they think that
time
is being wasted.
However
, since everyone is not
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privileged
enough to continue education without experiencing hurdles. So those hapless individuals
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to strive more than the others. Come to think of it, these young people
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to work their ass off in order to provide for themselves. Everyone will be ahead
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steps or a lot of steps than them. They might be
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and mentally drained due to the hardships, for what? Just to enter their dream university like the other guys. No
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when spent with the right
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intention
intentions
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In addition
, I think there are still advantages with the topic mentioned above. There is always a result in every effort an individual makes.
For Instance
, working before entering college is a waste of
time
for others but enough
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to fully discover your passion.
Moreover
, you can buy the things you need for school. And
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, after you graduate you are
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equipped
and mold by the experiences that others do not have. In Conclusion, there will always be
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negative and positive
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for every situation in life. Perspective is one of the
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to overcoming trials in life.
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