The two maps below show as island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps depict the development of an
island
before and after the building of accommodation facilities for welcoming tourists.
Overall
, while
the above picture illustrates how the island
was before the construction, the map below shows the creation Change preposition
of tourism
tourism
attractions and living accommodations.
In the past, Replace the word
tourist
beside
the small groups of palm trees Replace the word
besides
in
the east and Change preposition
on
west
of the island
, the overall
spaces were empty. According to
the construction plan, the piers of landing boats were established in the south of the island
which is also
the beginning point of the vehicle road. The track leads to the reception centre and ends at the new restaurant which is located near the sea.
The residential areas were built to the east and west
of the reception centre. Regarding the accommodation in the west
which is nearer to beach
than the living area to the east of the reception, it was constructed surrounding the existing palm trees. Each house Add an article
the beach
in
the eastern side Change preposition
on
walk
to each other via footpaths. Change the verb form
walks
This
is also
the same for the the
Remove the redundancy
apply
west
housing area which is also
connected directly to the beach and a swimming facility. Even though many human buildings were created on this
island
, no natural resources were cut down nor
destroyed.Correct word choice
or
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, overall".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, west with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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