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Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty percent over the last fifty years. What can we do to help protect the wildlife round the world ?

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According to some news reports published , the number of wild
animals
 all over the globe has reduced drastically in the
last
 half-century. In my opinion , both individuals and
government
 can collaborate into protecting these
animals
 by taking appropriate measures . I will explicate my point of view in the upcoming paragraphs. Commencing with, pollution and human activities performed for manufacturing practices have impacted our environment.
Consequently
, numerous
animals
 die in their habitat .
Thus
 protecting the climate is essential for saving wild creatures,
For instance
 , fumes generated by vehicles pollute the air and
animals
 cannot breathe properly which leads to the end of their lives .
Moreover
 , Cutting down the forests for business purposes affects the life of creatures found in wild areas.
Government
 should enforce a law against illegal activities of cutting down the trees for personal profits. A survey conducted by the Forest commission society showed that disappeared 30 per cent due to the destruction of forests . Apart from
this
, the Illegal activities of poachers and hunters should be restricted.
Although
 the
government
 have banned unlicensed hunters to go into forests and hunting wild
animals
 still ample people destruct the
animals
 for commercial purposes and for personal benefits
also
. To exemplify, humans sell
animals
 skin for various purposes and consumption as meat for a nutritious diet,
Government
 can pass a law on illegal hunting of wild
animals
 and poachers which can be subject to the imprisonment of 2 or more years.
In addition
 to
this
, awareness should be spread among people about the precious life of
animals
 and alternative foods of meat which contains proteins must be founded out . To conclude , recent reports have stated that creatures found in wild areas rapidly declined in the
last
 fifty years. I believe that stopping hunters from illegal hunting and poachers can protect wild species.
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