Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.

Nowadays, the number of crimes committed by young people is escalating everywhere around the globe. The origins of

this

situation seem to derive from three factors,

while

several remedies appear to be open to us. The fundamental cause appears to be poor parental discipline, which gives full control to

youngsters

themselves,

thus

leading them to violate a law.

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, in Mongolia, a police report states that 80% of the

youngsters

who committed

offense

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had no one to supervise and talk to them. The second factor is the adults or peers who force them, and

due to

their naivety, teenagers can get involved in unwanted situations. At

this

age, their mental state is unstable;

in addition

, inducement from strangers or friends may deceive

youngsters

and use them for their advantage. Another root for

this

problem is low family income which pushes adolescents to steal in order to maintain their lives. Especially, orphans living in poor conditions who have no parents to feed them happen to be

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criminals. The first simple step to diminish

this

misfortune is to listen to the teenagers more often and regularly talk and ask how they feel; it would keep them in comfort and let parents keep the children in check.

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method is to educate students about crime; teachers and parents will

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a major role by giving them lessons (it would be more effective if the knowledge is acquired from a young age), and

as a result

, it would reduce the crime rate and change the blinded view. If more information was available, it would stop unavailing ideas and help choose better options as students gain more insight on not

to commit

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any

offense

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.

Lastly

, employing and paying a sufficient amount of wage to

youngsters

might decrease the number of

theft

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thefts

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. Employers can perhaps train and give a considerable amount of work

while

encouraging them with a bonus. In summary, poor supervision and financial state appear to be the major causes. The problems could be solved with guidance from adults and more opportunities to earn money for the unprivileged ones.