Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. What the possible causes of this trend, and what solutions would be effective reducing crime

It is true that

crime

numbers have

been

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increased among youth in various parts of the world. In

this

essay, we will discuss two reasons and measures. Mongolian

crime

statistic of

last

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decade (2011-2020) reveals that the

overall

number of

crime

has climbed markedly

among

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the age of ten to eighteen. It appears that there are main 3 causes related to the issue.

Firstly

, the most common phenomenon we can observe in

such

crime

pattern

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has always been

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divorce

ratio. For the

last

10 years, the number of

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has

been

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doubled as the

crime

of young has tripled. It is possible to consider that declined attention for

children

could lead to increased risk for

crime

susceptibility.

Secondly

, the young adults seemed that they don’t truly understand

cyber-

crime

is

alike

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as

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other crimes

such

as burglary, heist or murder. Apparently,

cyber-

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cybercrime

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crime

has skyrocketed from all other

crime

groups

last

ten years.

Cyber-

crime

has the exact same nature as other crimes including; deceptions, coercions and law-breaking. The solution

for

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the problem can be

briefed

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as supporting

family

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families

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and individuals. The participation of each one of us and

also

government

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is equally important. I believe the family is the foundation of society.

Thus

, it is crucial to emphasize the importance of the family to everyone and inform the adverse effects

divorce

can bring to the

children

.

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the other hand,

government

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could improve the child-care program with the purpose that if the couple had gotten

divorce

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,

children

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the children

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wouldn’t have suffered from the consequences.

Additionally

, it appears that schools and educators have an

importance

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role as well. Understanding

true

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nature of

cyber-

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cybercrime

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crime

could help adolescents to make

right

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decisions. In the long run, for the younger generation, it could have important prevention effects from the

crime

.

To sum up

, the main cause of the surged number of

crime

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crimes

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can be explained as decreased attention for

children

and

changed

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outlook

for

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crime

. The solution for the issue can be educating individuals as well as implementing better child-care

program

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programs

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.