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The number of older people is increasing. Some people think that this will cause problems in their countries; others believe this group is important to society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

#people #countries #group #society
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senior
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 citizens population has increased across the globe. Along with
age
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almost
 experience which helps to overcome
may
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 situations, but it
also
 includes many
health related
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 ailments that
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 to be taken
care
 of and personal attention is
also
 must to look after them. A group of
people
 state that elder
people
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 others say it is always advantages to have them around us.
This
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possibilities.
To begin
 with, along with growing
age
people
 tend to gain enormous experience of handling tough situations they are good at
understanding
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the understanding
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 problem from the root and will explain the cause, will
also
 provide valuable suggestions to overcome.
for
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 in most
of
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the
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families which
consists
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 of all
members
 of all ages (including
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newborn
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new born
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newborn
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 babies)- grandparents tend to take
care
 of babies far better
then
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 parents.
There
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These
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 small home remedies
also
 are very helpful in preventing small
health
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issues
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 of
infents
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infants
.
Not
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also
 that, If any family
memeber
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member
 is facing any financial or
health related
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health-related
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 issue and if it is
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discussed
 with them they come out with valuable resolutions. Mostly old aged
people
 are considered as pillars of home and will be as effective to the community,
country
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also
.
On the other hand
, with growing
age
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people
 may get
health
 ailments like blood pressure, diabetes or any other sickness due to lack of immunity power they are less resistant to these diseases and tend to rely on other family
members
, which leads to burdening of the other family
members
. In some
cases
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 older
people
 tend to behave like small kids they need special attention in
such
 cases. As most of the family
members
 are occupied with
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work space
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workspace
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 they will be unable to take
care
 of
there
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their
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 elders.
This
 may lead to sending them to old
age
 homes
also
, where they may or may not be taken
care
 of which is a heart-felt situation. To conclude, In my opinion for a family or a society to run and operate smoothly, flawlessly it should have a balanced combination of elders, aged and youngsters.
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all
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 these classes of
people
 we can lead a
successfull
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successful
 life.
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