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Tourism is one of the fastest growing industries and contributes a great deal to economies around the world. However, the damage tourism can cause to local cultures and the environment is often ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Tourism
 is one of the biggest parts of the
countries
' economy. Lots of
people
 who earn money in
this
 sector are trying to make more popular their
countries
 about
tourism
 to attract
the
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visitors. Because
tourism
 is a really good way to help to governments and
people
 to develop their
countries
.
Besides
 the good impacts of
tourism
, unfortunately, there are some negative things about
tourism
.
Firstly
, the
people
 who live in local areas may be affected by
tourists
 about their cultures.
Also
, some of the
tourists
 do not care about the environment where they visit. These reasons make
tourism
 dangerous. In today's world,
people
 can be affected quickly by social media applications, television programs, and
tourists
 who come to their
countries
 from different cultures. Especially, the young generation always wants to learn new things and change their
behaviors
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. When they see a different person from different culture, they may want to copy him or her treats.
This
 factor is the biggest threat that can destroy the culture.
Secondly
,
tourism
 might be the reason
of
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 environmental problems.
For instance
, some of the
tourists
 throw their rubbish into forests and the sea, the lakes and the rivers. These rubbishes are causing to kill the fishes who live in the sea, lakes, and rivers.
In addition
, when they put a king of glass into the forests it can be caused forest fire and destroy the
nature
 of that country. Governments must encourage the crowd to obey the rules about
nature
. In conclusion, all these reasons are due to humans. If the governments want to protect their
nature
 and cultures, there must be clear rules.
Also
, education is the most important thing to improve the society's knowledge and
behaviors
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. These solutions would be the best ways to protect the citizens and
nature
.
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