Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time? (

Someone thinks that spare
time
is much more for
children
, and they should
consump
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consume
it to conduct various home
excercises
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exercises
.
This
statement is mentioned to alarm how
children
to
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use their
time
effectively.
First
and foremost, the most thing
of
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younger
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the younger
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is education and they need to use their
time
to fulfil all of
tasks
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their teachers
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when they have attended their classes.
For example
, one semester a child can join in several subjects and exercises of them are given to highlight subjects' knowledge to help
children
can remember them longer and stronger.
Moreover
, those duties which are said
be
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essential parts of
subject
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are related to real-life circumstances,
this
will help
children
can collect useful information since they are students and just learning
in
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all
time
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times
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.
On the other hand
,
children
should spend their free
time
to do
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a variety of something else
likes
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doing exercises or
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new friends
instead
of only studying. Because potential benefits of relationships are huge and they can help people to get their goals easily and successfully.
For instance
, if
children
have no friends or even an excellent one as a friend, at the moment they need someone to give viral
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advice
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or support to finish
homeworks
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homework
that is
impossible
,
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and makes them get bad results. In conclusion, everyone should use their
time
with a clear plan.
This
means both
children
and adults shouldn't have free
time
so much, they can conduct beneficial actions to replace unnecessary things like
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with buddies or surfing the Internet without any main objectives.
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