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Some believe that people are naturally born leaders while others feel that leadership skills can develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays many individuals are arguing over the topic of whether
leadership
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 is something innate or could be acquired through
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. In
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 essay I will be discussing both views and why I tend to believe that
leadership
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 is a trait some
people
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 are born with but
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 it could be developed through
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 experience.
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 with,
people
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 who opine that
leadership
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 is something that
people
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 are born with base their argument on the fact that some individuals are born with charismatic personalities and have a powerful presence which is something that can not be acquired.
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 , being articulate and having good oratory skills are essential skills for leaders to have. ,
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people
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 can not learn to be positive, inspiring and enthusiastic.
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, we can not ignore the fact that
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 experience plays a major role in shaping
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's characters and personalities.
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, we have Nelson Mandela who became a powerful inspiring leader because of the hardships that he faced and conquered throughout his
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.
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 indeed is evidence that
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 traits are something that can be acquired later on in
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.
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,
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 requires assertiveness which can be developed and learned over time. In conclusion ,
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 it is a fact that some
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 are born with natural attractive characteristics which is something necessary that every leader should have.
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, I do strongly believe that
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 hardships and experience are key factors in developing
leadership
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 traits.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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