When people need to complain about a product or poor service, some prefer to complain in writing and others prefer to complain in person. Which way do you prefer?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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, where some people think to report it through a mail or a letter and others prefer to complain to management in person. I believe that the former would be efficient and practical ,
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feedback to an organization would be letter writing. Since everyone has access to technology, sending complaint emails is a piece of cake , which is mentioned on the products. Indeed, to acknowledge the unsatisfactory
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gaint company products is laborious, as offices might be in different states.
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post, unless they won't provide a mail address.
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, if one felt unhappy with a biscuit packet that cost five dollars,
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it is not value for money to go to an office and report the complaint rather than text them a message.
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, it makes
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up on unsatisfied service. Having a word with workers about the product defect, which they forget or
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acknowledge to higher authorities; So, the paper-based complaint may help them to track and enhance the quality of service.
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, they can update the customers by reverting to the same
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. A good example is reporting glitches in
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, whenever a bug is reported that would be escalated to the manager who is responsible
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the issue with the concerned team.
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, paper reporting helps to acknowledge the problem to the proper person. To summarize, I believe that written feedback would be effortless and help the organization to track the issue and take appropriate action.
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