Governments should spend more money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent years, transportation has become a significant concern for the government. Some
people
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argue that the government should invest more in building and maintaining railway systems rather than spending funds to improve
roads
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. In my perspective, I certainly agree with the statement, but I
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believe that the decision of building railways or
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should be made based on the preference of citizens.
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with, in developed countries, the train is efficient and comfortable commuting. The high capacity of trains is able to deliver a major of passengers with fixed timing.
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,
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positively reduced the number of cars used and traffic congestion in peaked hours, which can save more time for an individual.
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, over 70% population in Mumbai preferred to commute by railways to work due to the overcrowding on the road and the low-cost tickets it brings.
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, railways are contributing several positive effects to the environment and the traffic.
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of reducing vehicles on the street, the carbon dioxide and gas that are released into the environment, causing air pollution, is decreased.
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, road construction causes destruction to society.
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, in some areas, the extension of the road is going to take place for a few months,
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causes damage for the houses and shops around, which is a huge loss for local
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, the number of car accidents are increasingly due to various reasons.
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roads
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connect many remote areas, when heavy rain occurs, the
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get congested in which
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are not able to reach the destination on time. In conclusion, investing in the railway's system is an efficient solution for traffic congestion and the environment.
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, the authority needs to ensure that their area
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suitable for railway networks and the local
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Carbon emissions
  • Mass transportation
  • Traffic congestion
  • Economic growth
  • Regional development
  • Initial investment
  • Feasibility
  • Flexibility
  • Rural areas
  • Integration
  • Sustainable
  • Efficiency
  • Infrastructure
  • Commuters
  • Public expenditure
  • Autonomous vehicles
  • Long-term investment
  • Accessibility
  • Connectivity
  • Modal shift
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