You are going to spend your vacation in Rome, Italy. Your friend's grandfather lives there and has offered to let you stay in his apartment. Write a letter to your friend's grandfather. In your letter: Thank him for the offer but politely decline infrom him of when you will be in Rome and your travel plans invite him for an outing.

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dear Mr Ali, I hope you are healthy and safe. Today I am writing

this

letter to let you know that, I am very delighted as you offered me to stay at your house but I think it will not be possible as I have some urgent work. To embark with,

Firstly

, I want to thank you as you think for my accommodation.

In addition

, I am feeling very lucky that I have a friend like Ritu.

Moreover

, she always told me about you, that you are a very gentle person and you proved it.

Furthermore

, I want to tell you that I am coming to Rome for 3 days as I have a business meeting.

First

two days I have to attend my business meeting and on the

third

, day I want to visit some tourist attractions which are near to my hotel. Actually,I want to know that countries culture,tradition and environment.

Last

but not the least, I want you to join me while I will visit some places

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if you come I will feel splendid. Please try to manage some time for me. I hope to see you soon. I will wait for your reply. With love, Zannatul Firdaus

Submitted by Zannatul Irin on Mon Jan 24 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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201 words

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