Working long hours causes a great deal of stress and can be very bad for one's health. VinMec’s top management must find a way to reduce this type of stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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decades, people have

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good

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their health and quality of life. Health

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are going to face with

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an overload

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of work.

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by the pandemic significantly,

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concern as to whether the

selfcare

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should be attention

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reduce our burnout

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daily task.

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opinion, the merits of stress control should never be

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neglected

.

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, doctors are always in

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situation

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when they

care

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patient. Stress limits

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good

interpersonnal

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interpersonal

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interaction

. So, it will affect to result of treatment as well as the emotion of the patient.

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, when the doctor in duty, he has to give

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best

dicision

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decision

by himself if he

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good mood. Contrary, it's easy to do bad

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the

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night if he was a

longday

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long day

tired.

Secondly

, the conflict in the

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may affect to the mood and decision on many occasions. New

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or technic may apply to but it depends on how many

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and how long you do it. There are always

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difference

differences

between

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.

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proplem

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problem

may cause the

streefull

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stressful

in healthcare management.

However

, as a doctor, we should find the solution to reduce that burden. We should

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to

upgrate

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and update our knowledge to be more confident in whether

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difficult

situation. Team working skill is most important in the hospital environment. The manager

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should

open the extra course soft skill of

care

team to have a good cor-

oporation

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operation

poration

in the working day. In

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conclusion

concussion

, under no circumstances should government let

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self

care

attitude elevate by their policy and remuneration to help medicine

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. Stress is one

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to protect

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yourself

, but it

take

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over flow

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, it will bad for

every one's

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health.