Some people believe that too many resources and attention are devoted to the protection of wild animals and birds ? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

According to some individuals, there is too much focus and resources are given to the safety of wild

animals

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and birds . In my opinion,these

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animals

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and birds are important for our ecosystem and they are on verge of extinction. So ,

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why my views are

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same

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the same

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wavelength

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ideology.

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with,the government of every country requires to protect the remaining wildlife organisms because there

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high

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chance that they may

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get extinct soon ,which will directly cause a disturbance in the economy.to

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,according to a report by The Hindu Newspaper,in

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india

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,owing to the population of lions in

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North

India

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,the population of monkeys has increased hugely .

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,we need to monitor these activities,and

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provide more funds to achieve

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.

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,

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true that the hunting of tigers ,wild pigs and buffaloes is popular in many parts of the world ,to obtain meat . In

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way , there is still no strict laws to prevent

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unlawful acts against innocent creatures . It should crucial for

regims

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to give more attention

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wild creatures.

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,according to a survey by the world protection organization conducted,in

India

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, every year,thousands of deers and tigers are illegally killed in southern

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. To conclude,taking into consideration from both views,it is felt that

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resources and attention,which are getting by

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animals

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and birds are

indespensable

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indispensable

.since ,if they will extinct ,its straight effect on

ecosystem

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the ecosystem

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.As well as it

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also seen

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that hunting

animals

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are

also

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increasing day by day.so ,it is important to restrict them. According to my perception,

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am in the favour of

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phenomenon.