Some people believe that too many resources and attention are devoted to the protection of wild animals and birds ? To what extent do you agree or disagree?
According to some individuals, there is too much focus and resources are given to the safety of wild
animals
and birds . In my opinion,these such
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animals
and birds are important for our ecosystem and they are on verge of extinction. So ,that is
why my views are at
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the same
with
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ideology.
To begin
with,the government of every country requires to protect the remaining wildlife organisms because there are
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high
chance that they may Correct article usage
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also
get extinct soon ,which will directly cause a disturbance in the economy.to examplity
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India
,the population of monkeys has increased hugely . Thus
,we need to monitor these activities,and also
provide more funds to achieve it
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Furthermore
,this
is also
true that the hunting of tigers ,wild pigs and buffaloes is popular in many parts of the world ,to obtain meat . In this
way , there is still no strict laws to prevent such
unlawful acts against innocent creatures . It should crucial for regims
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For instance
,according to a survey by the world protection organization conducted,in India
, every year,thousands of deers and tigers are illegally killed in southern India
.
To conclude,taking into consideration from both views,it is felt that although
resources and attention,which are getting by such
animals
and birds are indespensable
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the ecosystem
also seen
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animals
are also
increasing day by day.so ,it is important to restrict them. According to my perception,i
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