Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environment problems. Discuss both those views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, environmental
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are a serious issue in recent years. Some
people
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believed that the main problem is the loss of particular species of
animals
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and
plants
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while others hold that there are more important environmental
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that we need to look after.
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essay discusses both sides and will give my own opinion.
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, the loss of
plants
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and
animals
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is one of the environmental
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that we need to solve but it is not the most serious problem. It is notable that there are a lot of communities, scientists and countries trying to recover those disappearing species
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as replanting the
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or protecting the
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that are endangered.
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is true that some climate change and destruction of the environment make those
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and
animals
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hard to live yet
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can be solved by
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’s hard work or protection.
On the other hand
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, there are some environmental
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that we can’t solve . The only thing we can do is not let those
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get worst.
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, due to climate ,change the average temperature is increasing and
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will let the sea leave raise. Some land will be stunk into the sea and cannot be used for agriculture.
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, the land which
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can use might decrease while the food provide will suffered in difficulty.
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, air pollution is
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a serious environmental problem.
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will easily get sick or have some disease
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the air pollution. For those kids of environmental
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, it cannot be solved by
people
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. In conclusion, I think that the loss of particular species of
plants
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and
animals
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is one of the environmental
problems
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, but it is not the most important one. There are other serious environmental
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in recent years
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as the average temperature increase and air pollution are more important.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • ecological balance
  • pollinators
  • keystone species
  • extinction
  • ecosystem services
  • pollination
  • water purification
  • climate regulation
  • climate change
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • environmental degradation
  • illegal wildlife trade
  • conservation
  • sustainability
  • preservation
  • habitat destruction
  • endangered species
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