INVITATION LETTER TOPIC . You are planning to go to a music concert in your town and would like a friend to accompany you. Write a letter to invite your friend to the concert you are planning to go to. In your letter, say: what the content of the music concert is where and when the music concert is why you think your friend should go to this concert You should write at least 150 words.
Hey Jasmine,
How are you doing? I hope you did well in your exams. You will never guess What I found online. Taylor Swift is coming to Sydney next month. We should definitely go to her concert.
I know you are obsessed with Taylor Swift and I immediately remembered you after seeing
this
post on Instagram. Apparently, she is touring with Cardi B and they are playing all their originals together. I can't wait to go to the musical and enjoy delicious street foods from the stalls that will be arranged at the concert.
The show is scheduled for May 15th in Sydney National Stadium. Not only is the stadium is long way from the airport but also
it will be heavily crowded. However
, the event managers have organised shuttle buses from the airport to the stadium.
I think we should go to the show. Also
, it will be the ultimate blow-off trip during our vacation. nevertheless
, we can also
host Instagram live and snap many photos. Of course, we will be able to meet many influencers.
Anyway, how about I come to your hostel tomorrow and we book the tickets together?. Meanwhile, please check out Taylor Swift's official Instagram page. We will catch up soon.
Warm Regards,
Barbara.Submitted by dhayaneyvijayan on
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Tone & Register
Remember to maintain a more formal tone when writing letters for IELTS, even when writing to a friend. Phrases like 'You will never guess' could be made slightly more formal to align with exam expectations.
Task Achievement
Ensure your letter includes all the details required by the task instructions. While you've covered all points, expanding a bit more on 'why your friend should go to this concert' with more personal reasons or benefits could enhance your task response score.
Coherence & Cohesion
Good structure and logical flow throughout the letter, making your points clear and easy to follow.
Logical Structure
Effective use of paragraphs to organize ideas—each paragraph introduces and develops a specific point, enhancing readability.
Tone & Register
Your enthusiastic tone and the personal touches, like mentioning 'Instagram live and snap many photos', make the letter engaging and tailored to your friend.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite