You paid a refundable deposit when you rented an apartment. You left the apartment in good condition but the Landlord won't return your deposit. Write letter to the Landlord. - explain why you are writing -ask for the return of your deposit -inform the landlord of possible legal action

#deposit #apartment #condition #landlord #-ask #-inform #action

Dear Mr Black, I am writing

this

letter in regards to my advanced deposit when I started renting your apartment. I am transferred to the neighbouring town.

Thus

, I find it hard to travel every day from your apartment to my current job location. My manager advised me to look for a flat nearby. Since I left the apartment in a good condition. I think there is no reason that my deposit is on hold.

Moreover

, I am asking for your cooperation in returning my money. Mr Smith told me about my rights regarding

this

matter. Actually, He offered me some help in terms of legal actions. You and your wife had been so nice to me. And I really appreciated how you took care of me when I am still living there.

Hence

, I really do not want to consider options that would make things awfully awkward between us. I am really hoping to settle things with you and your wife in any possible way. Thank you. Yours sincerely, Monica Min

Submitted by Monicaallenborrero on Tue Jan 25 2022

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