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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

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Most peoples’
hobbies
 are relatively easy while others can be more challenging and they are
also
 loved. Some
people
 think that
hobbies
 must be difficult to bring joy, personally, I disagree with
this
 statement because both types can be relaxing and fun. Hobby’s difficulty is depended on human personality because some
people
 can like different
hobbies
.
For example
, most
people
 like dancing because it can be relaxing and helps to remove stress. It requires a little equipment and doesn’t depend on fitness level so that anyone can dance. I remember when I was eight I used to go to a dance club it was not a demanding or challenging experience. Another hobby I find easy and healthy is swimming because it makes your body resilient and strong and you do not need to have something special for it, indeed it may be quite difficult for
people
 who have a sedentary lifestyle.
On the other hand
, some
people
 feel exciting when they do something hard
than
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then
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 One of these
hobbies
 is fencing where you must have special equipment and a special costume that provides you protection from stab wounds. It may seem hard for
people
 who are not interested in
this
 athletic sport
however
people
 who love
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emotional release
  • cultural significance
  • globalization
  • cultural exchange
  • technology
  • preservation
  • cultural heritage
  • social cohesion
  • expression
  • consumption
  • production
  • traditional music
  • international music
  • diversity
  • identity
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