Some people believe that it is the best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some
people
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that accepting bad
situations
is the solution to
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along with the problem, while others think that improving
such
situations
is better than letting them get worse. In my
opinion
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the
arguement
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argument
between the two views, mentioned above, mostly depend on the personality, and on
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one’s lifestyle. In the following
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I will try to discuss both sides, and those advantages and disadvantages. Based on my own experiences, there are
situations
when
people
can do nothing, but get along and accept the situation as it is.
However
, there will always be other ways
people
can choose. On one hand, a person can not allow himself to argue with his boss about becoming unemployed,
for
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because he was not educated enough or well-skilled for the job.
This
is
such
a situation that
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one has to accept and has to move on. But
on the other hand
,
this
person can
also
try to find
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an other
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job, which would fit his skills more.
Besides
that, those who disagree with accepting these unlucky
situations
often think that there are „what if”
situations
in life and they do not want to live with remorse.
Furthermore
, those want to close the situation as they tried their best. Summarizing the above, and according to my knowledge, these
situations
and their endings
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on
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one’s personality, how they think and how they act in
such
circumstances. In my honest opinion, there are some conditions when
people
should stand up for themselves, but
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, there are some
situations
which need to be accepted.
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  • settle
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  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
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