A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter describe • what the book was about explain • how this book influenced you • say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I would like to contribute my experience in reading a

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that influenced me the most. Let me begin with the name of the

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, it is called, Think like a monk by the author Jay Shetty.

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is based on the life story of the writer himself, who is a famous motivational speaker.

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, it includes details of challenges faced by the author and how did he overcome them.

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, reading

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helped me to be more positive and face obstacles in life boldly.

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would be helpful for people who are suffering from depression, and those who are seeking

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self-help.

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, I believe my experience of reading

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wonderful

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would motivate a lot of others to read it and help develop themselves. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully Jane Simon.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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