You have recently attended a two-day course, and now a course organizer is asking for your review and comments. Write a letter to the course organizer. In your letter, you should: • describe the course; • explain whether or not you linked the course, and why; • provide some suggestions for improvement.

Dear Mark Tony, Thank you for creating
such
an interesting course about the Java language, which give to beginners an opportunity to improve their knowledge and understand all aspects of
this
language.
This
was a really enjoyable time for me. I have received more useful
information
about the Java language. Now, in my perspective, I have totally understood all
basic
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aspects of it. All good testimonials about your school and teacher are true. Currently, a have been starting searching for a job in the IT-sphere.
However
, I think my knowledge is not enough, because I have only basic
information
. I hope you will create some courses for advanced users in the future. If you decided to start advanced courses, I would immediately participate in them. Hope it will be in nearby future. I want to suggest some improvements to your website. It does not contain the all needed
information
about courses in school, like curriculum, lessons' topics, educational sources. The course
information
pictures only general
information
about the course. Please write it more carefully and, I confident,
this
will increase the number of the participations. Yours sincerely, Bim Bom
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