Some people think that big international sporting events are not worthwhile for the host country. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, some individuals believe that worldwide sports are not profitable for our nation. I am in

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the political

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relationship

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and economic growth

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country. To commence with, political

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are made and improved between one country to other countries. To explicate it, if another Nation players and audience come in India

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they meet our country people and create bounding.

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of India was invited by America as a chief guest.

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international events are more evaluable for a Nation.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

103 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Some people think that big international sporting events are not worthwhile for the host country. Do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreing language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people say that musci is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The goverment should sometimes infringe on people's freedom for the security of society. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The ownership of car should be restricted to one per family in order to reduce traffic congestion and pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.