Some people think that big international sporting events are not worthwhile for the host country. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some individuals believe that worldwide sports are not profitable for our nation. I am in
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with
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statement due to
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the political
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relationship
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and economic growth
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country. To commence with, political
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are made and improved between one country to other countries. To explicate it, if another Nation players and audience come in India
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they meet our country people and create bounding.
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, An article was published in ' The time of India' in 2018, showed that
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of India was invited by America as a chief guest.
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international events are more evaluable for a Nation.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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