Some people encourage young children to leave their parents house as soon as they become adults while other say children should stay at their parents house as long as possible. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

A number of persons believe motivating youngsters to leave outside their

parent

's home when they become grownups is foremost

while

others believe they should be within their

parent

confines even as adults. Staying outside their homes will make them responsible,

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the brawn to make decisions;

on the other hand

, most adults use the opportunity to become wayward by joining bad companies. Both will be discussed to create an opinion in the course of

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essay .

Firstly

, it is salient as

parents

to give our young ones the chance to explore, to use the practice they have been taught in their everyday lives as adults.

For example

, my auntie has a son, as soon as he clocked 25 years , he was encouraged to get an apartment of his, she did it out of the love she has for him as her son,

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helped him a lot in terms saving knowing every year he has rent and other expenses to pay for . When children leave their

parents

to

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life, it is a huge sign of maturity and accountability; they should be encouraged to do so at all times. On the one hand, a group of

persons

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object to the fact that children should not be allowed to leave their

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parent's

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house to stay on their own. Most youngsters see

this

as an opportunity to indulge in whatever pleases them because their

parents

are not there to monitor them.

For example

, a friend of mine named Sarah left her

parent's

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to stay alone, she was influenced by friends negatively into lesbianism, cybercrime and abuse of drugs. These are qualities she did not have or possess

while

in her

parent

's house but

due to

the freedom she began to enjoy staying alone, she indulged herself in these qualities that will end up destroying her life. And at that

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it will be difficult

converting

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her back to the good morals her

parents

instilled in her.

Parents

should ensure they always communicate with them, they should ensure their youngsters see them as their confidant, by

such

they will be guided always.

To sum up

, in my ,opinion children should be given a good time to be on their own, make decisions, at

such

making them have a good sense of responsibility to their selves,

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, younger ones and to

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society at large