The growth of Online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays e-commerce business is growing up rapidly all over the world because it is gaining vast popularity among the new generations. For

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many super

shops

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allow their

products

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to sell online. It has a greater impact on

people

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behaviour, as they easily buy their needs without physically going to shop. For

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reason, many

people

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believe in the near future all kinds of

shops

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will stop selling their

products

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face to face in all regions, whether it is in town or big cities. I totally disagree, with

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statement. I will discuss the matter in

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essay why I

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and

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explain the pros and cons of the rise of virtual shopping.

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of all, it is true that online shopping is achieving more and more popularity day by day. We can not deny the advantages of it.

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, During the covid pandemic, when

people

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's are not allowed to go outside that time most

people

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are shopping online and fulfilling their basic needs. It really helps

people

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to stay at home.

People

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's does not need to go outside for buying their goods. That's not mean that they do not need physical

shops

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in future. If that's true,

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after improving covid 19

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were not going to

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to buy

products

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the clear message that we need online

shops

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as well as physical

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. Another way we can explain it

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is not all

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or our requirements, we can not fulfil online.

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, if someone needs to cut his hair he needs to go to

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a barbershop

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. He can not cut his heir online. That's why from my point of view I would say, not all

shops

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will close for arriving virtual shopping. We need a physical shop

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to fulfil our needs. To conclude, though online shopping change our lifestyle a lot we need a physical appearance shop

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to complete our demand and

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will not change in future.

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retail apocalypse
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Many countries have the same shops and products. Some consider it a positive development, whereas others consider it negative. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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