It is now possible to order almost any item over the internet and have it delivered to one's home. As a result people are no longer patient or careful in their shopping habits. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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internet is ruling the world across every aspect and the usage is tremendously increasing every
second
. Almost everything manufactured each corner of the
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globe
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can be purchased and delivered to the
door steps
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.
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of
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there is
somelevel
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some level
of carelessness
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in terms
of spending can be seen.
Firstly
with the access to
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on all
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handheld
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hand held
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devices it has become very easy for people to order the stuff with minimal knowledge on the product.
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either reading the reviews
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following the discussions.
This
trend is continuously increasing and they are becoming impatient not to study and even to understand if the product is of use or not gradually emptying the wallets and filling the house with unwanted items as they are
delviered
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delivered
right to the
door steps
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doorsteps
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Further
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more
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apply
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the habit of online purchase tends people to keep browsing and waste valuable time looking for offers.
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there are
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of physical and mental issues which arise by having
eveything
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everything
delivered at home as we are missing out on minimum exercise and physical movement. In conclusion,
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everything online and shopping things
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are unnecessary not only has
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implications but
also
has physical implications as well
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • online shopping
  • delivery
  • patience
  • carefulness
  • shopping habits
  • value
  • individual
  • preferences
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