Some
people
believe that a huge amount of government funds should go towards the building of new and fast railway tracks to connect cities while others think that
money
should be spent on upgrading existing public
transport
in a great number of countries around the world. In my opinion, it is
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equally vital to construct new and efficient
transport
systems and to improve existing modes of
transport
.
On the one hand, some communities think the construction of new railway lines and implementing extremely swift trains between towns have several advantages.
Firstly
, the
time
used on communicating between places would be much shorter which would give
people
more
time
to spend with their families and work more efficiently without worrying about the traffics.
For example
, a
lot
of
people
living in crowded cities have to spend a great amount of
time
on transportation, getting stuck in motionless roads for hours which sacrifice their precious
time
to spend with families or to relax after a tiring day.
Secondly
, constructing new
transport
systems would greatly improve the quality of life in a certain country which would attract tourists and workers from other countries, which can generate a
lot
of revenue for the country.
Finally
, since the commute from one city to another is very efficient and swift, there would be no discrimination of the prices of real estate due to the easiness or difficulty of commute.
Conversely
,
on the other hand
, other
people
think it is a waste of
money
to build new commute roads and should spend the budget on improving the public
transport
that
people
are using now. They believe rather than spending a
lot
of years and funds to create new commute routes, it is more productive to improve the quality of the existing ones as
people
are already used to them and would require a
lot
less
time
,
money
and energy.
In addition
,communities, especially from developing countries , would think that there are better uses of the government
money
such
as on improving the health care system, education system and public safety than to use them on building new railway networks.
In other words
, the commute between towns is not one of the basic necessities of a country
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therefore
it would be sufficient even if the existing modes of
transport
for the public are fixed.
In conclusion, there are several reasons on each side of the debate of whether to build fast and new train tracks or to improve the ones that are already existed, and I believe that we should implement both strategies depending on the situation and available budget of each city.