A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest an interesting part of the city to live in • describe the public transport in your city • say how your friend can meet new people there

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Dear John, Thanks for letting me know of your movement to

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location and I am excited to meet you in person. Before that here is some useful information about the city. Considering your job nature, I would suggest you live in the Toronto city downtown as it has access to all multinational IT companies and offers good nightlife.

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, it is easy to find shared accommodation at an affordable price. Toronto has a wide range of transport facilities

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as tram cars, public buses, go-train and separate routes for cyclists. All these can be availed through the monthly pass within the budget. As the city is crowded with an influx of immigrants from all parts of the world, you will find different cultures and alike mindset people.

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, everyone is cool and easy-goers. I am pretty sure that

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with your friendly attitude you can easily approach new people with a smile and definitely you will get a positive response. Wish you a happy journey and waiting to see you. Best Regards, Ram

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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