Task 2 : To succeed in a business, one needs to know Maths. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Learning math is a key to performing calculations related tasks in daily life. To become a successful businessman, it is paramount to know mathematics. I totally agree with
this
statement because it helps people to calculate profits and loss margins and save many small and large companies from accounts fraud.
Firstly
, knowing basic mathematics
such
as addition and subtraction calculation is a necessity for the common man. Whereas for businessmen, maths is a backbone to achieve long term success as numbers help them to comprehend the theory of gain and loss for services offered to the consumer market.
For instance
, companies like Amazon and Google generate revenues based on their analytical skill of playing around with numbers and these figures
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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