You are going to spend your vacation in Rome, Italy. Your friend's grandfather lives there and has offered to let you stay in his apartment. Write a letter to your friend's grandfather. In your letter: Thank him for the offer but politely decline infrom him of when you will be in Rome and your travel plans invite him for an outing.

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Dear Mr Smith, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing

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letter to thank you for the invitation of staying in your apartment in Rome. I am appreciated your kind offer. Unfortunately, I have been booked a travel agent for my Italy trip, as I am coming with my parents.

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, I think is it better to have a local travel agent to show us some famous places, because my parents decided to visit some specific places, so maybe staying in a hotel would be

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for us. Anyway, I will be in Rome in early May. I would like to invite you to join us to have dinner one night. I think possibly Saturday night, but I need to organise with my travel agent,

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I will confirm with you again. I hope to see you soon

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and thank you so much for the invitation. Kind regards June

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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152 words

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