In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a partuclar time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?
With the advancement of urbanisation, juvenile delinquents are evolving day by day. There has been a controversy among
people
regarding Use synonyms
teenagers'
roaming around at Change noun form
teenagers
night
in today's generation. In a few areas in the USA, youngsters are forbidden to go out of doors after a particular time at Use synonyms
night
, and if they want to go are asked to be accompanied by a guardian. I totally agree with Use synonyms
this
legislation by the authorities, as it will not be safe for those.
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Firstly
, most teenagers are getting involved in crime from an early age Linking Words
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while
they don’t have the ability to distinguish between good and evil. Correct word choice
apply
Furthermore
, it is effortless for the criminal to manipulate them Linking Words
to do
illegal deeds so that they easily become the Change preposition
into doing
victim
. Fix the agreement mistake
victims
For example
, Linking Words
according to
research data, After imposing the new rules in the USA, a significant majority of juvenile delinquents percentage rate fell into decline. Linking Words
Therefore
, to secure young children's lives from Linking Words
such
issues, Linking Words
this
rule is considerably fruitful for societies.
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Secondly
, recently, wildlife has been observed disturbing local livelihood, especially at Linking Words
night
, in the United States. To illustrate, from a daily news portal, leopards and wild bears are reported in many regions; Use synonyms
while
searching for food, they Linking Words
tried
to attack pet animals and young children. Wrong verb form
try
Consequently
, Linking Words
this
news has become a nightmare for the local Linking Words
people
because of Use synonyms
this
phenomenon. Linking Words
Hence
, to save young Linking Words
childrens'
parents should not let them go outside alone in the dark.
Correct your spelling
children'
To conclude
, it is not safe for teenagers to wander alone at Linking Words
night
as animals and evil Use synonyms
people
could be harmful. So, the decision from the Use synonyms
USA
government to stop the youth Correct your spelling
US
going
outside alone after a specific time at Change preposition
from going
night
is highly appreciable. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
people
should follow the rules for their safety.Use synonyms
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Task Response
In the introduction, it is important to directly address the prompt statement and clearly state your opinion. You can improve this section by clearly stating your position on the curfew for teenagers and briefly outlining the reasons that support your opinion.
Coherence and Cohesion
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