Museums and art galleries should concentrate on works that show history and culture of their own country rather than works of the other parts in the world. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Museums
and art
galleries
are where show works
relating historical and cultural knowledge, and it maybe need
to show more objects representing their own Change the verb form
needs
country
more than other nations. I totally agree with this
opinion because of advantages for both homeland and beneficial
for other countries.
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benefits
Firstly
, the homeland get
the convenience and increase Change the verb form
gets
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the cognitive
cognitive
of citizens. Because the history or Replace the word
cognition
culture
is the separated things of each country
, a nation
will meet difficulties in finding what object specialized for culture
or history of another, and defining of objects representing for its own is an easier way. As a result
, museum
and Fix the agreement mistake
museums
art
galleries
of this
country
should concentrate on the
simpler operation. Correct article usage
apply
In addition
, museums
or art
galleries
concentrate
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concentrating
works
symbolizing for its
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their
country
will help its citizens gain more deeply knowledge
about their Replace the word
knowledgeable
nation
. If museums
find ways to improve the impressive
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impression
of
work representing for its Change preposition
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country
frequently, they will attract more local visitor
to come and researchFix the agreement mistake
visitors
about
.
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Secondly
, when each country
shows more national works
, it will create the
special and unique national tradition, so the variety Correct article usage
a
about
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of
the
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culture
in the world could increase. Correct your spelling
Furthermore
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Furthermore
with
a smaller volume of foreign Change preposition
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works
means there is little information about other culture
, this
encourage
citizens to travel to another Change the verb form
encourages
country
for watching more. This
seemly is a way to boost the tourism of other countries. For example
, there is a small amount
of patterns about Korean traditional clothes in external Change the quantifier
number
art
galleries
in Vietnam, by seeing these in Vietnamese galleries
, people will be desired to travel Korea
.
In conclusion, I think that showing Change preposition
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works
representing culture
and history of nation
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the nation
museums
or art
galleries
have beneficial effects to not only to their nation
but also
to other countries.Submitted by tthuongulaw on
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