Some people believe that professional athletes should be free to use performance enhancing substances if they wish. Do you agree?

Over the

last

two or three decades,

performance

enhancement

drugs

have been increasing tremendously than ever before; Some think that professional sportsmen should be free to utilize

drugs

whenever they want.

However

, I strongly disagree with

this

statement and

this

essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. To commence with, athletes cannot use

substances

for their

performance

enhancement because

this

can lead to providing numerous health problems

such

as cardiac disease. They use these kinds of

substances

for playing better with full enthusiasm, but they can affect negatively and suffer a multitude of troubles from

this

,

therefore

, many nations banned sportsmen for games who are used extra

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drugs

.

For example

, a recent report analysis in London Times said that more than 30% of professional athletes suffer cardiac sickness across the world due to the over-consuming consumption of

substances

.

Therefore

, professional sportspeople should not be used freely.

Furthermore

, sportspeople should not utilize

drugs

for enhancing their

performance

because they should be utilized

to

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their hard work and training to win the match. To be more elaborate, if a sports person believes these kinds of

substances

rather than hard work, he should be eliminated from the competition

such

as medical qualify test.

For instance

, the Olympic committee takes medical assessments for all Olympians which takes over

substances

for winning the competitions.

Hence

, sportspeople should stay away from these kinds of

substances

. To conclude,

drugs

can enhance

athlete's

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performance

, even though,

this

is not a good thing across the world;

this

can provide enormous repercussions to the athletes who are using

this

.

Therefore

, I strongly disagree with

this

statement in the above-mentioned details and I hope

this

process is conducive to building a healthy society.