Some people think it is no longer necessary for children to go to school because they can do all their learning online. Others believe learning in schools is essential. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In some peoples opinion,as all learning material is available online and
students
can learn from the comfort of home ,they do not require to attend the school
in person,while others believe it is vital to go to school
for all directional growth of students
.The next
paragraphs will shed light on both sides of the notion but, I think attending school
in person is more beneficial than online.
At present due to the covid-19 pandemic for reducing the spread of infection, the majority of universities and higher study institutes started online learning and it works better for them.So some people argue that this
should be fine for schools too.Because learning material is available on the internet and video learning through google classrooms should work the same way for children.Furthermore
,it will save their time to travel back and forth from home to school
.Additionally
,they do not need to face harsh temperatures in some countries like Canada where in winter temperature remains below zero.
On the other hand
, students
in early learning classes
do not have the computer knowledge to go online and attend classes
,their attention span is limited so,they need constant reminders which,is not possible in online classes
.Although
they can study learning material online, life lessons like discipline,teamwork,respect and other moral values can not be taught through online classes
.Additionally
,connectivity of the internet is an issue that disrupts learning activities.Furthermore
, peer relations which are an important life lesson will be missed. Long hours on screen can damage the eyesight of students
.
In ,conclusion online learning looks more convenient but, is not that beneficial for schools in terms of all directional development of students
. so I will refer to person schooling for students
in early grades.Submitted by mahesh029 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite