Many people say that universities should only offer places to young students with the highest marks, while others say they should accept people of all ages, even if they did not do well at school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Education

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is a very interesting topic and not to mention very significant to each and every one of us. My

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always used to say that

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is the only treasure you possess that no other person can steal or take away from you until the day you die.

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is what I bear in mind wherever I go or in whatever I do. In

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essay, they are asking whether they should accept

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of all ages or focus only

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those who are young but made quite a mark before entering the

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.Isn't it that life is a

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learning process? Both sides have their advantages and disadvantages which I will discuss

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article. If universities accept young

students

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with the highest marks,

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would give them a good reputation as they could proudly say that their

students

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are the creme of the crop of the schools where they came from. Now imagine having a selection of

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individuals who will be entering the

university

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, you could say that your

university

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produces quality future

proffessionals

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professionals

by the time that they graduate. But

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also

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has a downside as

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have mentioned earlier.

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would take forfeit

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the

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of those who are older but wants to avail

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chance

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of going into a

university

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. There are a lot of reasons or circumstances why a

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is delayed and not able to

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university

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at a younger age. Some are not lucky enough to have the financial resources and have to work so they could go to

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, some

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have to work and save money to get into

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. There are

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who did not perform well from the school where they came from but that should not be a hindrance for them to get into

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. Sometimes performance is not only measured through grades but

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in a

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's study or work ethics.

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, a

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may not be on top of his class before entering a

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, but because he is determined to go to

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and take up something which is considered his passion like arts or music, maybe

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the time that he can excel because of the love for what he or she is doing.

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flaws. They say that you cannot teach old dogs new tricks,

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also

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is similar to the argument we are tackling. The younger you

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a person or

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, the bigger the

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that you will

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him on the way that he or she is

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to become. In conclusion, If you ask my opinion on whether universities should only offer places to younger ones with the highest marks or to all ages, I would have to go with giving the

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to those who are no longer young but wants to receive quality

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because learning knows no boundaries which in

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case would be the age. I believe that every person

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deserves

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education

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if he or she is willing to help

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herself

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
6
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

516 words

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merit-based
competitive environment
academic standards
innovation
diversity
mature students
equitable
inclusive admission policies
educational disadvantages
holistic admission process
extracurricular achievements
non-traditional students
equal opportunities
societal progress

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More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information, therefore there is no need for printed books, magazines and newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Technology)

In many countries, people now wear Western-style dresses such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?