Some students found some subjects such as mathematics,Philosophy are difficult, so these subjects should be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that some students struggle to

learning

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subjects

as

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mathematics or

philosophy

.

Therefore

, it is claimed that pupils ought to choose whether or not to learn them.

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essay completely

disagree

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with

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statement and will develop a reasoned opinion

why

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on why

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these

subjects

should be taught

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all students.

To begin

with, mathematics and

philosophy

are paramount

subjects

to learn how to develop a normal life.

This

is because math is present in all aspects of life, everything we do is based on a number.

For example

, the

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act of buying a product in a supermarket demand a person to sum or multiplicate in order to complete the payment.

In addition

, learning

philosophy

is vital to learn how to develop

a

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critically thinking. To illustrate

this

, in order to discuss a problem, the brain has to

analize

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analyze

it in advance, and

this

is taught in

phylosophy

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philosophy

.

On the other hand

, many people believe that these skills should be optional and schools should promote personalized learning.

Hence

, pupils could be able to learn and boost different skills depending on their individual abilities. As a consequence, they would be more likely to achieve a higher academic level.

For example

, if a children

strenght

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strength

is biology, he could be taught

this

subject in more detail with a personalized plan that

boost

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 his knowledge and

thus

become

expert

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in

this

field. Despite

this

attractive benefit of leaving some

subjects

apart, I think that

such

as math and

philosophy

are vital for learning those others.

For instance

, in the cycle of

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in biology, is extremely important to know how to multiplicate the number of molecules in order to understand the process. To conclude,

although

learning individualized

subjects

can enhance the level of education of a student, I believe that

subjects

such

as math and

phylosophy

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philosophy

are paramount for making a proper living.