Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that government should make sure their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Individuals
health
and diet
should be their own responsibilities according to some people,while the other think government
should care for their citizen's health
and eating habits
.The next
paragraphs will shed light on both sides and I think health
and diet
can be decided by individuals themselves,rather than the government
.
Health
and diet
are the most important aspects of life as both are related to each other if you do not care for a diet
then
,eventually
your Add a comma
,eventually
health
going to suffer due to unhealthy eating habits
or due to unhealthy food
.For example
foods from restaurants and packaged food
contains a large number of fats,salt and sugar which in long run leads to cardiovascular and other health
issues.Besides
bad habits
like smoking and drinking leads to cancer and lung diseases
,so an individual should be aware of the consequences of their unhealthy habits
.
On the other hand
government
's responsibility is to set food
standards for restaurants and food
industries.So that the ingredients used and quantity of ingredients used in preparing food
are healthy for the general population.government
to make sure,Safety and hygiene standards for manufacturing and cooking are followed by restaurants and food
processing units.Proper infection control measures are in place in such
industries and controlling it by taking samples for safety.For epidemic diseases
like goitre in some countries, the government
should come up with additives in food
,like adding iodine in salts for control of such
diseases
.
In conclusion, health
and diet
are individual's decisions and it should not be controlled by the government
but the government
can provide recommendations for healthy eating and prevention of diseases
by promoting good habits
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