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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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IIn someone’s opinion,
music
 helps gather different nationalities together, no matter old or young ones. From my point of view, it is accurate, and I agree with the statement.
People
 can do cultural exchange through the songs.
Moreover
, musical lyrics may bring understanding between
people
.
First
 of all, there are plenty of various musical shows worldwide. Different nations come to the international events with their passion because it is their chance to become famous. They can show their language and national costumes to other nationalities. To give an example, Eurovision is
such
 an event.
This
 is an international TV concert with many artists where many countries can present themselves.
Moreover
,
people
 from all over the world watch
this
 through television or the internet. At the end of the day,
this
 international audience votes for the best song of the year.
In addition
, it is the most fabulous idea of different nations for
such
 concerts because everyone can forget about political and other arguments and enjoy melodies with lyrics.
Secondly
, the world is complicated because of politics.
In other words
, some countries may be closed to others.
Such
 as Russia and China were decades ago. Russians are presented to other countries as furious and harsh
people
.
However
, no one knew that they were the same as others until some musician artist wrote a song about it: we all have families, and no one wants to have a war again.
Music
 helped to understand many other things.
Therefore
, we could understand that all nations are the same humans. Even with travel restrictions, different
people
 can get together through the media and songs at any age and any time.
Music
 is a terrific method of sharing emotions, and it brings mutual understanding to each other.
Finally
, nationalities have non-understanding and conflicts in different situations like wars or other issues all the years. Despite it, we can all gather and understand each other at the end anyway, and
music
 helps us significantly with
this
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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